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« on: January 16, 2008, 01:52:40 AM »
Creations born
Fairies take flight
Glittering brilliance
How they fight
Peaceful destruction
Wings pulled
Creations died
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« Reply #1 on: January 16, 2008, 06:11:15 AM »
Oh the poor fairy, but it was a really catchy poem.  I'm not sure whether there might have been a hidden meaning in there somewhere but it felt like there might have been.
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« Reply #2 on: January 16, 2008, 07:14:28 AM »
Short, but with a lot to say. Very good.

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« Reply #3 on: January 16, 2008, 01:49:34 PM »
Something, or someone killing faeries?

I'm interested.

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« Reply #4 on: January 29, 2008, 12:56:24 AM »
I'm interested in the story behind the oxymoron of : "Peaceful destruction"

What is the purpose of including the poems in your narrative?  It seems they would serve to slow the reader down, to reflect upon what is happening, to wonder about what lies ahead.
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« Reply #5 on: January 29, 2008, 02:46:40 AM »
 Shocked remaining tight lipped on this I am afraid to say. It will be revealed in time.  Grin
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« Reply #6 on: January 30, 2008, 12:11:30 PM »
Fi, my dear, you have me befudled in what ever in hell you are doing here...but I have faith I will be amazed and laugh  at the wonderment of your creativity...write on!
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« Reply #7 on: January 31, 2008, 08:11:36 AM »
I enjoyed it also, Fi.  Even if you did leave me with more questions than answers.   Wink

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