Dispirited Goddess

[nightduty]

Sorrowing has laid me down
Making me wear a constant frown
Sisters say I’m but a child
My fury makes me smile
Sorrowing makes me write
Throughout the lands they feel my might
For it was not just one dreadful night
But three that have turned me into this
Skeletal, wallowing in my own filth
Abandoned by my loves
Teased and used from below and above
Flighty I used to be
Dancing and singing
Sorrow has made me explore
The darker side of me.

Ok, now I'll explain. These are are just a few poems I've composed to accompany a tale that I'm writing. I just wanted some feedback. I realize it is hard when you don't the thread of the tale. But I assure you all that once it is completed and the poems are in place you will understand a little fuller what the aim and genre will be.

[Sam]

Ahhh see now I get it lol.  I really enjoyed them all I thought they were quite pretty poems that brought pictures into my mind, sad ones, but pictures all the same.

[fstasu]

This has a sad almost depressing quality to it, like something lost that was cherished. Good write.

Bobbi

[nightduty]

Sam & Bobbi

Ty for reading these, theres actually a series of fifteen, but to put those ones up will reveal the mystery in the tale. They were indeed meant to reflect the main characters state of depression. All will be revealed in a couple of weeks if not sooner.

Fi

[robocat]

I wish I had the poetic talent for writing that you do, Fi!
The sentiments here are strong and make me wonder about their context, especially this line:
My fury makes me smile  That seems a contradiction of emotions so I'd love to know the context for that.
Cathleen
PS.  How are your parents doing?